beauty
alone on a bench
a candle in the dark
I cannot see
I wonder
I wonder why
why the sun won't shine
through the clouded sky
it seems too often
that we do not care
about beauty invisible there
about beauty invisible here
Author notes
this is a poem revised from my book i hope you enjoy!
A contest entry
- 10/30 Quickie by Southern Goddess.
525 points, ended January 7, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think in general? Improvements?
Comments
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I liked this, very much. Its very true, its to often that we pass by the most beautiful things in our world and dont pay them any attention. But what prompt does this fit into? Thanks for entering and best wishes!
~Forlorn Dreams
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