Just laying in my hammock fair
breathing in the country air
reading famous birdie books
while trying to tan my fairish looks.
When suddenly out of my snooze
a smaller birdie breaks my muse
landing with an awful thump
making my whole tummy jump.
Bleary eyed my head shoots up
"what do you want you cheeky pup?
Can't you see I'm reading here
now off you go my little dear!".
Off he flies in great disgust
when suddenly I think I'll combust
while flying off he left a present
it's white and gooey, not very pleasant!
So there you have it, day's gone 'splat'
and I'm not wearing my sun hat,
my head is red from too much sun
I think this birdie's overdone!
In a list
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 7 Humour by cricketjeff.
1250 points, ended January 15, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem, hehehe it is supposed to be good luck! but i do not believe being splattered is a good thing.
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Wow what a lovely poem. Wonderful flow of words. I like the little birdie that turdie. In Maine years ago I was laying out on the beach. A sea gull let go on me. They say its lucky because 1 in a 100 get terd on. I didn't feel lucky that day.
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Thank-you and congratulations, excellent poem and a well deserved prize. We hope to see you in the later rounds, all prize-winners are scoring points in the race to be crowned "Best Rhyming Poet on AP and thus the world!"
Thanks again for entering and supporting our rhyming extravaganza
Jeff and Sue
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Sue looked for the most neutral picture possible for this, to write a poem to it was a wonderful surprise and a very enjoyable read. Great to see you in the top of most rounds, I hope you can move up into the big prizes in the remaining rounds, looking forward to seeing you try!
Thanks very much for this entry.
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hehe this is suchh a cute and funny write and made me chuckle i love your ta on the picture aswell. and it flows beautifully. well done gran and best of luck
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lmao... fanx mum
i love to read funnys wen i tryin to wake up still ... good luck in the contest
xxx cheeky xxx
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