her whispers
give life
to all
through
silken touch,
and green
sprouts
from envy's dark,
as words
hide behind
his soul
A contest entry
- River Lady (Image Inspired) by Idle Mind Wondering.
1500 points, ended January 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this but was not looking for brevity in this contest. 50 - 100 words.
But,
your direction was great as her gentle, graceful song would certainly silence envy.
I applaud you efforts here.
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Very well spoken, the imagery flows like that of a lost and forgotten stream in the heart of the wilderness, lost from man, but not of God's eternal touch of beauty and serenity. At least that's what I thought of while reading this. -Skilt
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This is breathtaking and simly graceful and marvelous.
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