Upon my soul the kiss of light
whispers from your lips divine
The Angels sing a tender dream
soft as the caress of early morn
Forever was born in my heart that day
when you held me in your warm embrace
And all that we were became enchantment
within the wonder of your smile
My love.. my soul my life in your hands
until the day I drift away
Death take me and make me beautiful
in your eyes for ever more...
Author notes
My apologies to the contest host but I rarely feel comfortable rhyming.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write the missing lines by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This write certainly came from yor heart. It is full of love and deep passion and the flow is just amazing.
Awesome write!
All the best with this beauty
Gaylene
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The true key to writting poetry is not in hte stye of which you write but rather where it comes from. WHen you write from the tenderness of your heart like you do, so many can relate to the poem and feel its beauty and all that it has to offer. I think you did an excellent job writting this piece and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest you entered.
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Thank you for your words of encouragement. I've tried doing things differently and in the end my heart always wins out and I write what's there. Believe me when I say it can be a trial sometimes but I don't seem to have much choice or say in the matter.
Margaret
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you did well with this poem, entwinning words that make the poem make sense,rhyming is not what makes a poem better it is how you feel when posting and feeling good about it,very nice entry in my opinion...good luck..MM
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this is such a beautiufl and heartfelt peice and i love the imagery and emotions weaved in it. well done auntie and best of luck
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