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Lily Darling

Lily darling good night
May your bed bugs not bite
May all your dreams come true
Lily darling I love you

Lily darling, sweet dreams
Lily darling it seems
You may have had a nightmare
It gave you quite a scare


Lily darling tho, I'm not always here
Lily darling there's nothing to fear.

Author notes

I edited this after a contest because when writing it I had my daughter in mind and I wanted to change it to her name and dedicate it to her. This is her lullaby. I love you Lily darling.

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  • Aloneandbroken
    August 14, 2008

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    How very sweet, I am moved by this and how much you love her, WTG, I cherish this poem
    hugs my dear friend
    Buffy


  • gritsgurlxoxoxo
    April 19, 2008
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    This is so cute[:

    I'm sure Lily loves this.


  • Leanna-bean
    March 17, 2008
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    This is cute...I like it a lot


  • Andarael
    February 10, 2008

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    I know that when Lily gets old enough to understand, she will love this. Precious poem for a beautiful little girl.


  • Skitzofreinian
    January 16, 2008
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    that was very sweet
    and a great take on the prompt
    thanks for the read


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    this is lovely and a wonderful take on the prompt thanks for entering


    • SchizoChic
      January 7, 2008
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      Thanks so much. I really enjoyed your picture contests. This one was my favorite. It just flowed so well.


  • Tarja
    January 5, 2008

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    First I have to say, that is a gorgeous picture! You choose your contests well! Secondly you were able to bring that picture to life like no other! Fantastic job! I loved how simple and sweet this was!


    • SchizoChic
      January 5, 2008
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      Thanks so much. I have a thing for writing poetry based pictures. I think its more fun than anything else. I am visually stimulated I guess. Thanks for your kind words. Hope to see you around again soon.

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