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Red Hot Vixen

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I'm feeling rather naughty right now.
Look closely and you can see the wetness and excitement,
dripping down my silky thighs onto the floorboards.
All I can think about is you making love to me.
Just the sight of you excites me and sends my body,
into powerful and countless tremors.
I long to tie you up, spank, and tease you
with my long and gorgeous read hair.
Come and lie down next to me and let me satisfy,
every sexual and erotic fantasy within your little mind.

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Picture Prompt
Painting entitled "Dena" by Lorenzo Sperlonga.
10 Lines Only.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 18, 2008

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    Love the subtle control here, lol. Nicely written take for the picture, I think you mught have captured some of her thoughts. Good work. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • Stickboy gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    not sure your sis wants me reading things like this =)) this was well.... HOT best of luck in contest


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 6, 2008

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    love this! better not write what this did to my mind...I smell a man trap! Lol best to you in the contest~ Trisha~


  • butchbec
    January 6, 2008
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    mm i love this poem! i feel like it is directed at me and i am there! i love it! so erotic!
    Bec


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 5, 2008
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    oh man!

    great write my man! this is pretty hot! AND i didn't even look at the pic! wink, wink! l.o.l.!


  • Ephiphany
    January 5, 2008

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    LOL

    go head....Jay LOVED this by you honey, very enticing great job on the erotic imagery.
    Good luck,
    ephiphany♥


  • WhisperingSpirit
    January 5, 2008

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    OK Ok shooo red hot sizzling words
    I am sure she would come running.
    Talk about a hot sexy, moment you have done well with your words.

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