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a girl from far away

There was once a girl in a country far away,
not the first choice among villagers nearby
then she was filled with anger and dismay
She decided to travel away
internet became the solution
adding some manipulated photos
telling tales of how great her love was

The poor fellow abandoned his life
and went into a terrible strife
this woman he wanted as his wife
and he cut away family and friends
with an emotional knife

She came and brought her true self
the manipulated photo still on shelf
resembled nothing like truth at all
but for lies and sweet lounge he had to fall

Children then came into being,
the poor guy still not bale of seeing
that when secured and cared for
she found him obsolete
granted now a place as her servant

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading through this. This is so true of what can happen these days. Well done, this was enjoyable to read.