A white silhouette
of a lady of grandeur,
natures queen in
a waterfall veil.
Black is her dress
of the best satins,
with green leaves and
flowers for jewelry.
Lost in the forest
this nature queen,
she is hardly
ever seen.
But today she shows
herself with glory
for it is the suns birthday
she wears spider lace.
A great party there will be
she has gathered all natures
things, with her green twine rings
she dances with the heavens.
Later she will once again
disappear, but the moon
and the stars will be next
for the natures queen
to party.
A contest entry
- River Lady (Image Inspired) by Idle Mind Wondering.
1500 points, ended January 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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there are some good images here and a nice story but no punctuation. grammar counts.
thanks for the entry.
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I added the punctuation...hope it is not too late
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some lovely imagery here 'nature queen in a waterfall veil' I do like the way you have characterised and feminised nature presenting her in full glory
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thanks for sharing
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