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rebirth 2

you entered into my mind today
and again i wondered why
even though i know its over

the darkness is now gone
the clouds have cleared away
sunshine beams warmth upon my face

dimmly i look up and wonder
do you look upon me now?
or do you still look away

so much has changed since then
i'm not afraid anymore
i smell the scent of freedom

since your death

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  • storiesuntold
    June 20, 2008
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    Oh so sad

    This is a very sad write


    • Summer Dawn
      June 21, 2008
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      yeah, i know. my mom put alot of tests and trials in my life and gave me a life long battle til she died. by the time she passed away last year, this month, i was so tired of it all and so weighed down that it was a relief when she died. i have thought about her. but it was she who made things the way they were. she set out to destroy my happiness and she succeeded.

  • deanc444
    January 7, 2008

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    A few typos in this (have sent a message) but I like its simplicity and I like it starkness. Elegantly captures a scene that may be familiar to most of us: even when one has chosen to move on, and are comfortable with the decision so to do, one cannot but help from time to time to look back and wonder if. This reminded me of a recording of a song I have by Barry Manilow called 'Even Now': the sentiment is much the same in that. I think the chorus goes something like:

    Even now when I have come so far
    I wonder where you are
    I wonder why it's still so hard without you
    Even now when I come shining through
    I swear I think of you
    And how I wish you knew
    Even now