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Angel, Angel, Can you hear me crying?

An Angel of what was once beauty,
Now lying facedown in blood red dirt.

The Angel of death has met her match;
Herself.

No fear,
No regret,
Just failure.

No one wants to spend

eternity

watching who they love die.

Any good?

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  • Amaranthine Lover gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    "An Angel of what was once beauty,
    Now lying facedown in blood red dirt."

    I love those first two opening lines, it's beautiful imagery at its use, thanks for entering

  • Tarja
    January 5, 2008

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    I honestly think you could have done more with this... I mean... more passion could have been written into this.. more emotion... you know? I mean the picture SCREAMS of despair... and this just... didn't really get that across you know? Maybe the judge will think differently though. Good luck.