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.Snow White [[Ice]] Queen.

Frozen;

Forgotten;

Never forgiven;

White is innocence, but not like this.

White is pure, with a frosted kiss.

Lush eyes, pearly pale.

Skin just reflects light as if its

Imaginary.

Any good?

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    this is profoundly superb, love the language and how it flows, thanks for entering


  • Tarja
    January 5, 2008

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    Damn, that's awesome. I like it a lot. I had to go to the contest to look at what you were writing about but it totally fits. You did a great job giving the picture some life. Good luck in the contest.