On a day where the sun shone softly,
Through the trees I walked slowly.
Thou the day had been nice, I was worried.
Where my worries came from i did not know.
Wandering aimlessly,I stumbled across this stream.
Instantly I was at peace.
As I sat and listened I heard distant but nice things.
I heard the soft rustle of the small rapids.
The trickle of the small waterfall that lay downstream.
I heard the wisper of the trees talking within their leaves.
The calming chatter of small critters was above me in trees.
As well as the light singing of content birds of every color.
Thou I am the only one who knew of this stream;
Thou I only found It once;
I came to know it as Peaceful Stream.
A contest entry
- River Lady (Image Inspired) by Idle Mind Wondering.
1500 points, ended January 12, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for punctuating and capitalizing. It counts!
I read this a bit frustrated, lol, which has worked in your favor as I needed to hear her sing her peaceful song. well done.
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What the truth is ..it is a beauty of the soul..and what the beauty of the soul is..it is your poem here..well done..
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I try.
Comments such as your are always appreciated.
Thank you.
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