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Poor fish...

Can a fish be glad it's Christmas day?
He just swims his life away,
round and round that dirty bowl...
Still, I think he has a soul.

I'll paste a Santa sticker there,
right on the side, so fish can stare.
Plus an angel sticker, too...
that's the best that I can do.

Next, I'll teach the fish to pray
and worship all of Christmas Day.
He can sing some carols, too!
YES! That's just what I will do.

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  • Melodies
    January 4, 2008

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    Perfect colors for a fish bowl poem! I feel like I'm in the bowl! A darling poem and I love it because putting stickers on the bowl is such a cute idea!