Her blood's like ice,
Her heart, like stone;
A heavy price
For one alone.
The queen of frost
On her frozen throne;
Her life is lost
To the frigid zone.
Hail the Ice Queen,
The cursed crone.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Quickie = The Ice Queen by amaranthine lover.
363 points, ended January 7, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it flow well?
Comments
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"Hail the Ice Queen,
The cursed crone."
I love the last two lines, very funny for the pic prompt thanks for entering
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again nice, the flow seemed a little chopped at the end. You can tell you put thought in it. Excellant finish!
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all hail the queen of ice, i like this poem, you did a good job on it, i think you could have done more, this is still cool, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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