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Cruel Love

Upon my soul the kiss of light

Reveals a horrid, putrid sight

The Angels sing a tender dream

Your cackling growl, though, makes me scream

Forever was born in my heart that day

The amount of time I want to be away

And all that we were became enchantment

Your witchy stench a vile enhancement

My love.. my soul my life in your hands

You’re crushing my saliva glands!

Death take me and make me beautiful

To live within sight of you is cruel






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  • Amera gold member
    January 5, 2008

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    I like this, you write the dark genre well; you should do it more often. The picture looks like me without makeup.

    Love,
    Amera♥