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Laughs

No two laughs are the same.
Laughs just cannot be tamed.
When somebody starts,
They can try with all hearts,
But they can't stop the laughing game.

Somebody's laugh could sound sleepy.
Others could sound just plane creepy.
With so many kinds,
It boggles all minds,
But a happy laugh cannot be weepy.

My grandma's laugh sounds like a song.
My dad laughs as loud as a gong.
If you want to be happy,
Quick, make it snappy,
And laugh cause it cannot go wrong.

No laughs should come out of dismay.
All people's laughs are okay.
But when I get started,
My laughs so uncharted,
You should run so I don't blow you away.




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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 14, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This is beautiful, and I see you have won a Bronze trophy
    Congratulations !

    Best of luck in the new contest

    .♥.
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Dancing the Rumba
    January 13, 2008

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    This poem is really good, even if it doesn't exactly fit the option. I love the descriptions of the laughs. Thank you for this heartwarming entry.
    Vivien

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 10, 2008
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    Beautifully done. Thanks for entering.
    Good luck to you.
    Brian


  • nichtmich silver member
    January 10, 2008

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    I like when we all get to telling stories and get the giggles, then we're all laughing with tears running down our faces cause we can't stop I like the way you described the difference between Grandma's and Dad's laugh! Best wishes!

  • Dancing the Rumba
    January 10, 2008
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    Please put your option number in your Authors Notes. Thanks!
    Vivien

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