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As If in A Dream

Grey clouds got swept away.
Cause cloud nine came to forever stay.
There’s moments filled with being nervous and fears.
But the ones that fall have only been happy tears.
We know it’s hard for everyone else to see.
But our hearts know that our love is meant to be.
We currently may be so far apart.
Closer than anything though is our hearts.
On our face is big smiles worn each day.
Cause happiness has finally come our way.
He’s the light of my life.
As I take away all his strife.
Through much of our past pain.
Finding our soul mate is what we've gained.
Once so depressed and now filled with joy.
Having been given this sweet boy.
Who gives his all and just does everything.
As I with him do for our love anything
I’m so happy with him as he is with me.
We’re both so truly and completely happy.
Things at times feel like they’re not what they seem.
It’s only cause in this love we feel as if in a dream.
This love is so pure and beautifully.
That we’re thankful it’s actually in reality.

Author notes

Just a love poem....
(Note: I was inspired to write then while dating Joel, but in the end the "dream" turned out to be fake.)

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  • Celticjedi
    January 5, 2008
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    Brilliant. Just absolutely brilliant. I can tell you right now I've never read anything so well written, full of love and composed as a dream. You are a word goddess. Thanks so much for your wonderful entry, and I congratulate you and your boyfriend. May you be forever happy.
    Love,
    Cj