Maybe it's time I stop fighting the world,
just long enough to see if, maybe,
the world wants to stop fighting me.
No one else knows where we go from here,
so take my hand, we can find ourselves.
A light at the end of this path to guide.
The pieces come together over time.
The end is only as close as you hold it.
Once again we will learn to breathe.
Author notes
Uhm... yeah.
It started as a three-lined thing.
And then I added onto it for school.
Say whatever. I don't care.
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excellent expression
It is important to take one day at a time. I agree with your line: "The pieces come together over time."
Being patient isn't easy, but it will let you "learn to breath."
Ethereal One
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wow
this one is amazing
i feel the emotion behind it, its amazing XD
what does it mean though?
im having trouble figuring it out. lol
i loves you!
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Awwr, thanks Sunshine. <333
It means... well, it's mostly just my opinions and thoughts.
xD
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I love the beginning, middle, and the end. Haha, good job with the poem. ( =
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Heh, thanks!
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No problem. ( =
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