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One kiss

Upon my soul the kiss of light
lifts me from the dark
The angels sing a tender dream
in form of meadow lark
Forever was born in my heart that day
from one magic kiss
And all that we were became enchantment
and i your princess
My love---my soul my life in your hands
i place my trust in thee
Death take me and make me beautiful
someday you'll lie with me

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  • Sweetangelgrace
    January 5, 2008

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    Beautiful!
    Wonderful! That is such a great poem! Totally authentic and heartfelt...

    This poem awakened such personal feelings, it felt as though it was written to me. Sometimes, the simple promises are the best. And the most beautiful

    Can anyone tell me how to contact the author? Perhaps I can be your Princess


    and a KISS is more than the sharing of lips and breath. It is a mingling of hearts and souls.......


    GRACE





  • Lucky-Charm
    January 5, 2008

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    Omg! This is truly a remarkable piece of work! So touching...My favorite part was My life my soul -my life in your hands.I place my trust in thee
    Death take me and make me beautiful someday youll die with me...so heartfelt.