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Whew this is hot... I love this collaboration(?)
Great mind and sensual melding here
I really shouldnt read these at work. people are going to wonder why I am all flushed.
Delila
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I usually don't read erotica, but this was romantically beautiful and, if you can believe, innocent at the same time. Very smooth flowing as I read it, I absolutely loved it. I could practically feel the love, yearning, and tenderness radiating from the poem, just beautifully done. Bravisima! I LOVE the pic, too...lol and the ending...just very powerful Nice!
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Whoa! Now isn't this the spicy piece indeed
Very smooth. I do love the images and the style you've rolled with here. Extremely well done 
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Nicely evoking the passion of a love. Creating the sensations in whispered verse. Delicious.
Love, Tom B.
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i loved this poem, it flowed so well, and the language fit perfectly i love the stanza "Let your body quench me
in delicious paradise;
swollen, now ready with honey,
drawn, of fermented kisses.
Allow me to seize your love bean,
over rosebud perfumed bed" this is most definitely my favourite! enough to get me all hot and bothered! thanks for the great write!
Bec
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This is a very tastefully written erotic poem. It flows in such a way, it draws the reader deep into your sensuous masterpiece. The fires of desire and the tenderness of the passion you put into this poem add to the imagery. Painting so many images within ones mind that come alive as I read this piece.
I am sure your going to do very well in the contest you entered.
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true manifestation this is, my friend, it is strong, heated, addictive, i think you got it here, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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quite different take than I thought on erotica, but very well written, good luck in her contest, MM
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