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Chironic

Missing image

 

Susceptible to the wounds of kindness. 
Transmutation:  An old bridge over a beautiful stream.

 

Information in the symbol of an autumn leaf.
Transmutation:  A popularity that proves ephemeral.

 

Harmony through conflict.
Transmutation:  death, battles, the Path of discipleship.

 

A square brightly lighted on one side.
Transmutation:  A flock of wild geese flying south.

 

The journey along the Path, Ageless Wisdom, ancient records.
Transmutation:  achievement, Masters and Hierarchy.

 

Lessons in moderation.
Transmutation:  getting even with the dead  (I'm a fool).

Psychological foundations, biological inheritance.
Transmutation:  boy & censer near priest, far from God.

 

Collective cataleptic, spirituality, unredeemed karma, selfish.
Transmutation:  ground hog looking for the shadow’s shadow.

 

A woman having her hair bobbed spilled perfume). 
Transmutation:  devotion and idealism.

 

A mermaid emerges from the ocean
Transmutation:  the New Group of World Servers.

 

A big-businessman at his desk.
Transmutation:  A soldier derelict in his duty.

 

A secret revealed twice:
An old bridge over a beautiful stream.
Information in the symbol of an autumn leaf.

Transmutation?  uncalled for.

Author notes

Human worth defined from
The inside out
Written November 7th, 2003

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  • Katilina
    December 4, 2003
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    Chiron comes alive in my sun. The Fish is found rising, and the twins show their ugly side on the dark side of my moon. :0)

    Not uncalled for, should be called for more.


  • Redstormy gold member
    November 12, 2003
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    Whoa let me get my dictionary. You wrote a mouthful here my friend. Interesting mind you have.
    I love that picture too, you remind me of my oldest son sometimes.

    Red


  • jendragon
    November 11, 2003
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    Enigma...a fitting choice of name. I enjoyed this very much...the relationships between the pairs were creative and thought provoking. Almost too thought provoking, with the amount of sleep I'm running on these days. Thank you very much for your comments on Fake It; they were much appreciated.


  • Juliet D
    November 11, 2003
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    beautiful - so many thoughts to digest, so many striking images

    I'm in awe and have been struck dumb

    do come see me sometime
    ~Scarlet


  • Butterfly Dreams79
    November 9, 2003
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    Good and thoughtful write ET, It really makes you think . Thanks for your thoughful comment on mine also but it is not a incantation, just a write of my thoughts , wicked am i?
    love Ramona aka Happyme
    vivst again soon


  • Blondita
    November 8, 2003
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    Fantastic ET ! I should know that when coming onto your page to read your work , I should have myself sitting comfortably knowing I'll need sufficient time for numerous reads!

    I actually understood this one before referring to your additional comment ( a first for me )...there always seems to be an underlying and often hidden message behind your poetry that requires we stretch the cognitive capacity to it's limits...

    Incredibly thought provoking and words that are bound to leave so many of us pensive...a similar theme to your last work of art...ie... that it's all is the perception...self perception dictates how we view others and our world around us...and with no self worth , kinda makes you wonder how you can be inspired by all around you...

    Alot of depth in your words...peace and love

    ~ sonia ~
    Edited on Nov 08, 10:55 because ''.


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    November 7, 2003
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    Those of us who are known, but first be ranked by WHOM we are.
    If by God's standards, we are known by how we choose to know HIM.
    That means that the inside is first-- the soul; And the outward is the personality-- the person in access to the body vehicle.

    "I became a servant of this gospel by the gift of God's grace given me through the working of his power. Although I am less than the least of all God's people, this grace was given me to preach to the Gentiles the unsearchable riches of Christ and to make plain to everyone the administraion of third mystery, which for ages past was kept hidden in God, who created all things."Ephesians 3: 7-9

    very good idea and poem!! Thought provoking! Thank you, Cookiezeal

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