Pressed imprints of life’s promenade;
sunset brings tomorrow’s dreams~
arching soul to march forward with hope
Author notes
Prompt: Shoes
In a list
A contest entry
- 16 words of brilliance by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 4, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Memories, hope and inspiration, perfectly covered with inspirational wisdom in short form; well penned!
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Hello Dear Sis
Thank you for the beautiful comment and applauses on my poem! Always such a pleasure to hear your thoughts
Linda
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This was a real 16 words of brilliance, perfectly crafted with your poetical soul.
~Sonja~
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This sounds like a romantic evening on the beach...at least for your feet and your shoes
I can so relate to this piece whenever I get new shoes, my feet just fall in love all over again
Thank you for sharing more of your awesome talent with us, and congrats on the HM.
Don
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Thank you Don for your comments, always appreciate hearing from you.
Linda
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A touch of romance and hope meshed together with dreams, all from a journey in life. Sounds like a walk someone would be honoured to take with you.
Excellent entry. Congratulations on your HM
Adam
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I need new laces first
After reading the title I was like 'Where the heck is she walking to?" lmao I just hope you're wearing comfortable shoes, or that walk ain't gonna be thrillin' lol, nice poem Jasmine.
Reminds me of when people say, "They can talk the talk, but can they walk the walk?" In your case, just reverse it, and there ya go, a sweet poem
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lol Hello Tim, thank you for the "left field" compliment on my poem, alway enjoy hearing from you. lol
Jasmine
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Beautifully and wonderfully written, sweetie; I love this!
All the very best to you in the contest!
Much love,
Sandy
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Beautifully metaphoric and grasping... x
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Thank you so very much for your lovely compliment and for holding this very inspirational quickie So delighted you enjoyed my entry!
Linda
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