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Footprints in the Snow

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When you came into my heart

the sun shined bright and warm

Our love was intense and obsessive

it created a lovers violent storm

 

Not understanding the true feelings

that we each both felt deep inside

Emotions and lust took over the control

leaving heartbreak an lonliness we cried

 

Our dreams became dreary and cold

the storm blew in a ground covering snow

Revealing secrets we kept from each other

relative to things we both should know

 

When the sun no longer shined for us

We both agreed its better that you should go

My heart cried as you walked  through the door

leaving only your footprints in the snow

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Footprints in the Snow...describes best the heartbreak and lonliness I felt wnen my darlin' and I said good-by...I'm sure he felt the same way...

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 13, 2008
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    You have spoken loudly with your heart in this one..Beautiful writing


    Cindy


  • penman gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very amazing write. So wonderful for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Celticjedi
    January 5, 2008
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    Absolutely amazing, thank you so much for this entry. This poem is so beautiful and heartfelt, but you spelled "shined" wrong. The only thing wrong with it is you broke one of the contest rules: tell me WHY you picked the title you did. Could you please fix that? Other than that, I love this entry and really hope I can keep it. Great job.
    ~Cj


  • arafura gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    sad...

    Very sad but quite beautiful my friend! There is a lot of emotion in this and you have expressed yourself very well as you always do. Loved it! Good luck in the contest!

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