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Entreaty

Oh! What is this daft and irritable stallion

who beseeches me so?

Boasting prideful neighs and stomping hooves

 at my contented heart.

Do I know of his enormous passion

and delightful dealings?

I do not, nor do I feign the want of them.

Will he not bow down and let the sleeping dogs sleep?

Wake not those hounds of inconstance and doubt.

I have no desire to know of their adulterous natures.

Be gone! You wretched beast of lust and wanton flesh

which these eyes must see past

and these lips must not taste.

Mine is a peaceful and most dutiful heart;

do no tempt me with your lascivious

and wayward platitudes!

Oh, woe upon me to see

the truth of this through his deceitful

eyes, feel the softness with his callous touch.

Bold stallion, nay will I fall prey to your wicked beckonings.

Leave me to my humble master,

his love a safe haven from myself.

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  • KingJustin26
    January 9, 2008

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    I feel this is most likely very personal to you, or at least was at the time you wrote it. It's hard to fight temptation sometimes. You can put distance in between, but that doesn't make it go away. And just because you're content with being with someone that doesn't mean that someone else is content with you being content. Pursuers(Stallions)can be relentless can't they? Good job on this. You misspelled lascivious by the way, and does sotness supposed to be softness?


    • Innisfree
      January 10, 2008
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      Thank you again for the critique! It was more an effect of exhaustion than misspelling, but thank you for pointing it out so that I may change it! And I agree with your comment about being content to simply be content. Excellent!