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Nice out today

Poised and looking, lusting for more,
wishing hurry to clutter clothes on the floor,
inwardly feeling hearts beating a flurry,
moistness awakening yet still,no hurry,
once more towards heaven take of me now! or i will mourn

Disagree at your peril for what you see,
is the calm before the storm

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 18, 2008

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    Damnit. I like what you've captured here. But it was supposed to be ten lines. You fell a little short (in writing anyways.) Thank you for entering though. Storm