Honed into lust's flame
I sense raging desire
To penetrate dreams
Cast glance in my direction
As I show you many things
Feel hell burn like bliss
Letting darkness surround you
In folds of passion
Forget mundane existence
This body is all you need
Author notes
Picture inspired.
My imagination of what she is thinking.
A contest entry
- Adult Picture Comp - Tell Me Her Secrets by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That body is all I need?? Nice! You've captured some kind of thoughts, not sure if it's from the picture or what, but this definitely gets to the point, and quick. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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What an image to write from!!! Why not just use the 'word' in the title lol?? Well penned, and kind of hot. Best to you in the contest!
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I was in an 'odd' mood & just thought for some reason using &*#! would be funny.
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Wow, this is an amazing write.
There's so many times that I don't really look at other people's poems within contests I enter... I really should more often.
This is such a sexy and sensual write.
I especially loved the lines:
"Feel hell burn like bliss
Letting darkness surround you
In folds of passion"
Combining light and dark... I interpreted "hell burn" as light and "darkness" as darkness... obviously.
I really loved that section.
Great write!
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