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I come to you
I say hi
You don’t suspect a thing
Than I reach in my back pocket
You watch as I pull out a note
I give it to you
You open it
Read it, read it that is all I can think
You do, than you laugh
Your friends start to laugh
I feel it penetrate me
I start to cry and run away
I find a dark corner and cry
When they find me I am dead
I have a note
It simply says
I loved her
Than she laugh
I loved her so I am dead
Everyone is crying
But I can’t hear
All I hear is laughing
So why did she laugh

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