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Immortal Love

I've found no reason,

For hope or belief.

My eyes water relentlessly.

I know i've been awake too long.

Praying the numbness,

Will over come the pain.

My minds' too close to the edge.

Nothing but insanity looms before me.

Still awaiting the immortal love.

Would it matter?

My decisions have brought me,

To my knees.

Awaiting for that moment,

For that place in time.

But with no hope or belief,

I doubt it will ever come.

That beautiful Immortal Love.

 

 

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  • HaleyMary
    April 11, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Lizz. Sorry it's been awhile since I've been by your poetry. Lots of emotion expressed in this piece and I liked the part of doubting the best. I think that's how a lot of us feel sometimes. Heck, love has taken so long to come my way, that I have given up looking and figure love can find me. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • CinnamonWolf
    February 22, 2008

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    confusing

    i dont know why.... but this was a bit confusing.... perhaps i read it too fast.

    do you like werewolves
    ?

    i saw your front page. i write most of my poems from a wolfs perspective lol


    • irishmidnight
      February 23, 2008
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      Yea this one was a bit weird...lol...I just kinda set my pen to paper and shut my mind off...**chuckles** And I love wolves!! They are majestic and amazing creatures. I'll have to check out your writes sometime soon. **Hugs** thanks for the comment hun!!