If my mind were a vein,
I would cut it wide for you
so you could feel my thoughts
flowing out of me.
A contest entry
- Prewrites Mania by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 84 entries
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What did you think
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Must be some form poem along with the directions.
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Dark but also beautiful in the sense you would give anything to show someone your true ways and feelings... I'd bleed for someone, if I had to, if I loved them... If it would make thigns worthwhile and ultimately better.
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I can't understand why in the world this would be seen as a 'dark write' when in fact to me it isnt'...? But on the flipside to this you took the presentation of a writer onto a whole new level altogether
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Wow. I love this imagery... I can't thik of what else to say, but you really made an impact on me with thse words. Raw, real emotion. Thanks.
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Not sure the last line is needed - I thought that what went before was really good - a great idea - that said i can see it is integral to the piece - this is very good, I liked it a lot.
James
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