Upon my soul the kiss of light
the dawn that lights my tear-filled eyes
The Angels sing a tender dream
helping me relive the unforgettable
Forever was born in my heart that day
the fateful day when our paths crossed
And all that we were became enchantment
a magical spell of delight
My love.. my soul my life in your hands
my savior, my captor, my missing half
Death take me and make me beautiful
so as i cannot lose what i have won
A contest entry
- Write the missing lines by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what are you thinking?
Comments
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I like the last part. I never thought that with death you can't loose. Very enlightening. Good luck. Rose
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thank you
i had such a great image in my head, but my brothers electric guitar killed it. grrrrrrr. i am glad you liked it, i wasn't sure how it sounded to others.
Chelsea
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