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These Angels Take My Life, So Angelic And Pure.

Upon my soul the kiss of light
Lines apper on my face and make me feel, as
The Angels sing a tender dream
To ease my heartbreak, and see whats real

Forever was born in my heart that day
The life we left behind
And all that we were became enchantment
Of Faerie tales, Dragons and Things

My love.. my soul my life in your hands
You tore it from my chest
Death take me and make me beautiful
Unlike your love could bring.

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  • PrincessOfFire
    January 4, 2008
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    Sadly done but so emotional. Good work. Good luck.
    Rose