before you go.....
let me tell you the truth
let me apologize to you
i want you to know i didn't mean it
and that i acted like a bitch
before you go.....
look me in the eye
and tell me another lie
tell me you don't care
tell me this is fair
before you go.....
shed a tear for me
show your vulnerability
smile for once a true smile
and speak in the voice that drives me wild
before you go.....
be sure this is what you want
be sure you are listening to your heart
know this is what you need
make sure you won't miss and dream about me
before you go....
please don't go
A contest entry
- Before You Go..... by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 9, 2008, 14 entries
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525 points, ended August 21, 2008, 40 entries
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Comments
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It's always good to say what you feel, as you never know when you will see them again and how much your actions may've hurt them, it's a brave thing to apologise though as long as you mean it.
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before you go....
please don't go
that gave me shivers.
nice write & good luck! -
Oh I know this feeling.
I love the ending very moving piece you have penned.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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