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Tears of blood

Blood of innocence shed,
Savior bled
Wrist that flow,
2000 years ago

Father shed a tear of blood,
As His Son was dragged through mud.
Tears of blood falls from His face,

The earth softly embrace

Bringing forgiveness,

Bringing g

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Tears reflect in His blood...

Blood for which he was nailed to a tree.

Blood shed to set us free

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 5, 2008

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    Absolutely beautiful. You did a great job with the flow and form, and most of all, the wonderful glory to God.

    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~