Upon my soul the kiss of light
Dawn breaks within my heart
The Angels sing a tender dream
Sweet magic they impart
Forever was born in my heart that
Our death would not devour
And all that we were became enchantment
And all the world was ours
My love.. my soul, my life in your hands
Once in life, now fate ensures
Death take me and make me beautiful
The grave forever make me yours
A contest entry
- Write the missing lines by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
let me know what you think
Comments
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Good job... love this poem one of my favs...

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why thank you!
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Nice job with the contest rules. Great lines you have added. They seem to fit so well.
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thanks!
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A tender loving message you have portrayed in this write. Good luck. Rose
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thanks so much
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