I see this girlie
Short, skinny, pale, in bed early
Short hair in the golden sun
Good hair, but it's rarely up done
She was born a blond with a brown eye
She stayed that way till she bought a dye
The dye was used and now her hair is red
Now she's much called a shameless redhead
She is often called much worse things then that
But she places these names into a hat
Throws the hat into a garbage bin
Never cares for it, holding up high her chin
She says she's got better things to think 'bout
She tends to get bossy,i often hear her shout
But her bossyness often pays off
And its results are usually worthy of
She tries hard to stay away
Running from unwanted people day by day
She doesnt like many people..only a few
And she is frank, can easily say "I dont like you"
However she is as frank in affection
She loves those she loves with no fake rejection
To her few, true friends she gives herself whole
And she eagerly proposes not to care bout being loved by all
I always see her night table have piles of books
She does chores at home , and sometimes she cooks
She hates cooking, saying she will marry a jobless chef
But thats a lie she knows, she believes only in true love
And no wonder she does, for she is in love already
And for a while now i watched them go steady
I think she found the one of her dreams
And they will be together for long it seems
She dresses with style but still prefers it all plain
She is sensitive, but recovers fast from all kinds of pain
She is rational and tries to always think clear
But her ideas, emotions and feelings she holds dear
She is a painter and her art..
Always comes only directly from heart
Drawing is her way of all expression
From expressing joy, love to fighting depression
Her art is personal and something she will never explain
She loves autumn and always misses rain
She is a weirdo, a wacko, a loner
Many say (might be true) she is just a goner
In her lives an artist, a poet, an actress
But no sport at all, shes as lazy as an old mattress
She is dog-like loyal and a slave of her mood
She is the sunshine when her mood is good
But when angry she is real frightening
Out of her comes out lightening
Some say she is a mind reader
Others favor her for a fine leader
Some say she's regular, others say she's real unique
She isnt a coward and after a quick thought,action comes quick
She is a doer and a dreamer
She is thoughtful and quiet, but when screams - a true screamer
In her there are so many contradictions
In her are so many truths and fictions
In her soul there lives a whole world
And she suffers maintaining it all in accord
She is nothing and everything all stuffed into one
She is just a human by God done
She is just like a million other as you can see
And i only wrote this because she is me
Author notes
Those who know me well say that this is very honest at evry point, but they also say that there is much much more to me.. but i guess that would be too much to write.
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Frankly one of the most interesting poems I have read in a very long time...I could not stop reading! You seem to be something of a poetic sorceress, no???? bravo....
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thanks for the comment i don't suppose i'd qualify for that though thanks.
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There's always more to a person. We're too complex to put into words. I enjoyed getting to know youa little more through this. And I'm curious to see your art now. Do you have a deviant art account?
The rhythm could have been more consistant, but it's not bad. I've never really tried to describe myself in such detail. It would take me forever!
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i loved the poem
i think you did a great job with putting whom you are out there, it was long but able to read with the spaceing i liked that a lot, thanks. -
I liked this one. I can see all the different aspects of you now...quite interesting!
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This poem of yours made me smile. I love the fact that you can look at yourself in such a way.
We all would be better people if we could all do that..
Cheers to ya, girlie..ya did great!!
Jin
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It is soo great to know yourself so well..Damn the world honey and you did.Being yourself can be a costly thing in this world.Go get'em
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I have aways wondered about you. I am glad you have revealed yourself. I realy enjoyed this poem and getting to know you better.
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...a very nice self describing poem. I'm glad you shared a little bit of yourself with the drooling masses. I'd cook for you but you'd soon get tired of microwave popcorn, peanutbutter & jelly sandwiches, and bowl after bowl of cereal. Actually, if put to the test, I can season and grill a pretty mean steak, pork loin, whathaveyou. (I don't imagine char-broiled pork loins are wafting through the air where you are though!)
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Wow, I am speachless. This poem truly is amazing, its more then amazing! Its truth! All the emotions, the words, everything about this poem is just beautiful!
Keep the amazing work up sweety! 3 cheers from me (But if I got to chose it would be 10
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Cute rhyming couplets you have used throughout this poem. Liked the flow and the alliteration as well. If you are she, then I guess you are!
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damnnnnnnn u killed ur lover!!!! he is so jealous now....how can u describe urself like that...not only describe but also rhyme!!!!dammmnnnnn i say i wish i wrote that poem...but u could go on u know...u hav many other supernatural xtraordinary abilities..
no realy..there r more of u..but damn...u killed him!!
its so greatly written...i don think any ordinary person can describe her/himself like that,writin a poem...ahh i can go on talkin now.... but..jus don wanna b loud..its soo true
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