There is a brief moment during a terrifying storm
when everything becomes clear. That is the eye.
Hope and faith return only to drop away soon after
upon the realization that you are now completely
surrounded.
Please tell me what you think
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i wonder if you know how it is to be a twenty something poet! with of course some inkling of talent. just thinking back to that conversation on jim morrison.
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you changed it...
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Life can be like that also... sometimes it seems the madness had ended and a calm-like state comes over you... and then, chaos rules!!
Liked this a lot!!
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very nice
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This reminds me of times in my life where things were going to well and I thought to myself... when is the disaster coming? And the longer things went well the bigger I expected the pending disaster to be.
I am drawn to the place where you say
"Hope and faith return only to drop away soon after"
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storm!
It hit you too then
the ferocious gusts and drench!
woke up and counted the tragedies... i.e. fallen fences
i heard 3 eldery people in Sacramento were hospitalized when they were blown over by the winds.
it was terrific, brought me to words as well darling.
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Surronded by what?
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a raging storm of erections... lol jk.
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hahahaha....
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Especially when the eye is tattooed on the chest
Seriously, this is a meditative moment and I like the title.
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That tattoo is actually the leo sign. if you're refering to the one on my solar plexis.
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