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WhAt I wAnT aNd WhAt I gOt ArE tWo VeRy DiFfErEnT tHiNgS

I wanted you,
I got him.
I wanted love,
But instead found sin.

I wanted to laugh,
All that came out was tears.
I wanted to smile,
But all i could muster was a frown with fears.

I wanted to get off probation,
I had to go to jail.
I wanted to move out,
I ran away.

I wanted to keep moving forward,
I fell back.
I wanted to live MY life,
I had to turn it over.

I wanted to have hope,
I gave up on myself.
I wanted another chance,
I got the cold shoulder.

I wanted every thing,
I got nothing.

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  • StonedSober
    September 24, 2008

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    im sorry

    hope ur doin better now....still think bout you sometimes..especially when ppl bring ur name up...i kinda miss you still but life goes on and i hope you can be happy....enjoy life...its only so long


  • Broken Machine
    January 4, 2008
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    Nice poem.


  • Delicate Fire Water
    January 4, 2008
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    I liked this poem, it was well written. However, I think that you should have done your background so people could read it rather than having to highlight it just to read it sweetie. I hope to read more of your writings, keep up the good work!

    All the best,

    *Stephi*