Wash it all away
this pain and confusion.
The cool drops fall
on my uplifted face
and I yearn for cleansing.
Drench my skin in
moist opportunity to
start anew in this life.
I want to forget him
and the pain he's caused,
let this rain take me away.
Author notes
Not really how I feel...exactly. Just an exaggeration on existing feelings.
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Hi my Precious Rain Girl,
Nice to see a poem written under this screen name. It's written wonderfully, even though the subject matter is sad. I don't know much about the situation, but whatever pain you do have I do hope the rain drops will cleanse it away from you. I don't want this Rain Girl to be sad in anyway.
Ted E
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Thank you for the wonderful comment There was just a lot of drama in my life at the time and I am happy to say I am over it The rain has cleansed
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It's truly my pleasure sweet precious rain girl
I'm thrilled to know that the rain did some cleansing for you and that you're happier these days. I look forward to writing my next poem for you
Your Ted E Bare
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