Lily of the valleys
Scattered around
My secret garden
In every jittery moment
I looked at you…
And I let them
Bloom in clusters
In every available space
As long as you linger
In my bashful sight.
Author notes
#2...who doesn't have a secret love?
In a list
A contest entry
- Love/Heartbreak by DeathlyAngel.
450 points, ended January 31, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey, this is cool, incorporating flowers into a love poem! I love flowers . . . .
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This is sweet. Its short but too the point. I likeies. Great job. Good luck
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Well done
Amazing poem filled with imagery! breath taking poetry!
Thank you for the comment.
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Gosh, metaphors much?? hehehe very good imagery and powerful words within such a small poem
I'm sorry I can't write more, I don't know what words to use...
I wish you luck in my contest though!!
Claire xx -
this is beautifully written with such amazing words and metaphors well done and best of luck in the contest
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This was beautifully written (:
Great take on the prompt, best of luck~
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This is great! I love the read and the image is perfect. I hav also looked at flowers with my ming on someone. Beautiful!
Love,
Amera♥
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