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Monster Man

I tiptoed past the door way and walked through the scary place
I tried to keep silence so the big monster wouldn't wake
Suddenly the monster screamed,which had frightened me a lot

What was I supposed to do? I can't make an evil plot

I ran as fast as I could.My heart was beating quickly

Because the big strong monster had started chasing me! 

I stepped down the wooden steps.But my foot fell straight through!

My foot had started bleeding! Now what do i do? 

The big black-headed monster started looking at me

Then i realized it was my brother as you can see

For he took off his mask and got me a bandage quickly

Then I felt all better! For I had a bandaged knee

 

 


 

 

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I am 10 years old! Hope you enjoyed my poem!

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  • Slick99
    June 15, 2008

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    phew...

    phew... that sounds scary SHAKESPEARE, i mean longlife... you done very, very, very, very, very, very, good!!! -slickster99er--slick99

  • Red Phantom
    January 15, 2008

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    It is very funny! I think that it will be SUPER famous someday! Great job,
    Jasper