This will just never go away…this unending dream of me and you together.
But I know it could not happen…it’s never going to happen because
Even though you say you want to be by my side and love me for eternity,
Deep down you’re still thinking about her.
This unending dream will always remain deep and precious in my mind.
The time I saw you holding her in your arms saying “Nobody can love you but me”
Made my heart break in two, even if you say you remain unfaithful to me and never part,
This unending dream will always remain in my heart.
From the time I saw her kissing you while I was hiding behind a tree, watching you with
Pain filled eyes, you didn’t see me though…how could you anyway
When you were too occupied by her?
This unending dream of me and you ever being together is nothing but an illusion now
Because no matter what I do or say you will never be with me because
You are still hung over by your first love.
Even though you will never be mine, this unending dream will never fade away.
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Comments
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nice poem.
Best wishes and good luck
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I liked this. I liked how some parts repeated to stress your point. Good job.
Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck!
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Part of me wants to like this, the other part doesn't. It seems like more of a ramble than a poem. It repeats ideas constantly. Yet, I like the form and the general thought behind it. Some parts are stronger than others. As a whole, good job!
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