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Diary entry no. 4

Dear Diary
I know I wasn't supposed to see it, I wasn't supposed to read, but nonetheless...

S tories of an old affair, only roleplaying, but yet so much more passionate and loving than the relationship of reality.
A nother woman, who shared with him his best, and I was merely background.
N ot even the music, so important to the story, but a dot, easy to spare.
I felt like nothing next to her.
T he stories, next to which I'm a frozen thing, responsibility.. a liability..
Y ou would never know how I wish I'd been her.

Author notes

Just a diary entry, really.
By the way.. the word SANITY wasn't intended.. I only noticed it after I'd written this.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    January 7, 2008

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    Deep Writing

    This is very very deep. Full of emotion. You poured your heart into this and it shows. Very good writing indeed.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon
    :}

  • Zarokk666
    January 4, 2008

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    My dear friend
    I admit that I have no idea how to comment on this
    Because this is not just a poem
    This is so much more
    -
    As a mere observer I have no chance, of completely understanding what you must be going through.
    But I do know that I felt sad after reading this, and I feel sad about the pain inflicted upon you,
    like I am sorry that I have not been better to keep in touch with you.

    MJ, if you ever need to talk
    feel free to call or write me, either here on AP or through my E-mail
    I am your friend and if you ever need me, just say so

    yours sincerely
    Anders Bjørklund Davidsen
    aka. zarokk666




    • Mj gold member
      January 6, 2008
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      Hi Zarokk

      It warms my heart to know that you think of me, and how I feel. Thank you for commenting on my diary
      I do miss talking to people, but I just don't know what to say. I'm not depressed, but I seem that way to most, and that annoys me.
      I'm just trying to find something to hold on to, right now.

      *hugs*
      Maja