She wants to be a poem,
she stomped her feet,
Pooh,
What am I to do?
She's already a girl
and that's a poem,
all soft and sticky
tricky and warm.
How is that not a poem,
Pooh?
What am I to do?
Maybe, if I said she was love
all curled up safe
like a kitten on the balustrade
maybe that would be alright.
Pooh?
I don't know what else to say.
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Written November 7th, 2003
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This was most enjoyable. Funny that she wanted to be a poem.
Loved the lines:
Maybe, if I said she was love
all curled up safe
like a kitten on the balustrade
thanks,
John -
You're so beautiful, this is lovely.
I was thinking about it the other day - I think poems are alright, but people are better.
Tricky is a great word it makes me think of The Cure and stuff
Sticky Licky Tricky Picky Spicky Kicky
Iky words rock don't they?
This poem's so warm and tender, I love it. -
Only you could write a childrens poem and use the word balustrade and get away with it. This is sweet though Lutie.
Now Desi wants to be a poem too, damnit!
/stomps her feet and walks away.
and a balustrade is a row of balusters topped by a rail, serving as an open parapet, as along the edge of a balcony, terrace, bridge, staircase, or the eaves of a building. You're such a freak and I mean that in the most endearing way.
Desiree
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Cute
To cute Lute~ Just to adorable and want to wrap my arm around~ Loved it
~ Keep them coming sweetie~ You have such a way with words 
~ Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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Girls become poems and poets become homeless.
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Awwwww.... when i am Eeorye blue, you know exactly what to do to bring me a smile....
i really am speechless and very touched
I love this, i'm printing and saving
~ Wendy
p.s. i feel hugged, and that's just too sweet !
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So many things are poetry. You point that out with your words here. Living is poetry, the kind unnoticed. Life is poetry, easy to overlook. The girl in these three stanzas is very much poetry. Great job...
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silly fun for kids
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How sweet and cuddly and written with loving affection. Any little girl would just love this one. Irene
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"all curled up safe"
What would Pooh know to do with all your love?
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Lute
This is a sweet write
Is this for Manicmuze?, she is a poem , one of my favorite writers
Take care,
Karen
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i like this tons..
as the line
"I don't know what else to say."
seems to be a common line parents use..lol
in the nicest way of course..lol
nice read
enjoyed
~*~Blu~*~
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Lol... yes, she is a poem now.... hopefully no more feet stomping
This is both cute and loving, Lute.. a very enjoyable read.
Dee -
Aw... she'll like this. 'and that's a poem all soft and sticky'. Affectionately teasing. I am fond of affectionate teasing.
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