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Angel

I see an angel
In this color of light.
It is beautiful, and yet
It is such a heartbreaking sight.
It shows love, for all
Shows dreams, that never fall.
Shows those who laugh
Those who cry
And above all,
Those who are nigh.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    January 5, 2008
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    thank you for your entry, and for letting the prompt picture take you, and for writing so well of what it showed you. Beautiful and heartbreaking is what you saw. Your rhymes are good, and the rhythm fits the poem well. My favourite line is /Shows dreams, that never fall/. When you read the contest notes you will know how well you saw what was there.