Two such souls intertwined by fate...
i take your hand and you carress my face
we know this is more then a one night deal
because the love in our gaze is such as steal
more then sensual the word itself barely compares
to the feeling i get when u gently stroke my hair
i feel it on the surface and even more deep within
as i begin to get closer to that glow that i in-vision
when i see our hearts collide in a heap of gold love
my desire is emblazoned with this feeling, I've known none
who even stand close or hold a candle, a light of hope
cause when we touch every thing feels right, and slow
the love we share is only intensified by this mystery
who am i who are you and is this even meant to be?
i have only one word to answer that 4 letters same as first
f. a. t .e
A contest entry
- GUY'S ONLY EROTIC CONTEST, I NEED AN AP HUBBY!! by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
300 points, ended January 9, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was remarkably good and very touching. That poem reminds me alot about me and how i'm feeling when i'm in love.I loved the part about the girl caressing your face and then the feeling you get when she strokes ur hair.It's breath-taking..it really is.I liked how u entitled it me and u and then ended it with f.a.t.e. that's what true love is about =]..i love it
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I am breathless. This is love. This is everything love should be
It read very well aloud and I just loved
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cause when we touch every thing feels right, and slow
the love we share is only intensified by this mystery
who am i who are you and is this even meant to be?
i have only one word to answer that 4 letters same as first
f. a. t .e
A brilliantly penned piece
Thank you and the best of luck
CIndy
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