I sleep upon a fluffy cloud
and float in the land of dreams
I become a fairy flying
across a clear, blue stream.
I drift on down and see a boat
just right for me to ride
made from gingerbread and candy
I stare around wide eyed.
Candy floss trees sway in the breeze
I try to grab some but nearly tip over
spreading my wings I flutter high
landing in a sea of clover.
Softly the sun shines down on me
this place I'm at is enchanting
with feelings of peace and fine release
I thank God my dreams for granting.
In a list
A contest entry
- You Know You Want To Look - Picture Inspired by Nighttime angel.
750 points, ended January 9, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a tranquil, peaceful, enchanting
piece of poetry. You really captured the
dream state that all dreams encompass. great
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Beautiful and serene hun, I can't believe I have caught up... woohoo for me... I hope that this does well in the contest hun
Karen
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peace...
I agree with an earlier comment which says this reads very much like a lullaby. Sweet soft and soothing! Great work. Good luck in the contest!
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Awe sis....so cute is this beautiful dream you have shown us, it is etched with such delicate and pretty imagery and reads just like a sweet lullaby. Well done with this simply divine piece of work.
Shaz xx
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butiful mum best of luck in the contest
xxx cheeky xxx
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This is absolutely
BEAUTIFUL. I love the imagery that you used in this poem. the words flow is perfect.
I love the entire poem couldn't pick out just one stanza that I liked the best. you did an excellent job on this picture prompt.
good luck in the contest.
kat
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oh wow this is such a beautiful and tender write it holds a gentle flow to it which helps to create the dreamful effect. well done gran and best of luck
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