Rub a dub dub, three babes in a tub
travelling life together
sugar and spice and all things nice
we'll brave life's stormy weather.
We're cute as can be,as you can see
playing happily in our tub,
till mother comes along singing a song
then we know it's time for our scrub.
Mother is keen to wash and to preen
this photo's about to be shot
she makes funny faces, we think she's a nut
then dad clicks the camera right on the dot!
It's all over red rover, can we please eat?
we're hungry, it's time for our feed
so with angelic faces we look at them both
and at last to our plead they concede.
Already we've learnt to get what we want
love and cuddles is high on our list
so don't be fooled by our innocent looks
hey you know that you cannot resist!
In a list
A contest entry
- You Know You Want To Look - Picture Inspired by Nighttime angel.
750 points, ended January 9, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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BRAVO!
One of the prettiest and most lovable poems I've ever read. Sweetly and cleverly penned with tender and heartwarming lines of enchanting fondness.
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LOL this is very cute, what beautiful little cherubs.... great rhyme in this one hun, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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lovely...
This was great to read! Thank you for sharing it with us. I think you captured the spirit of the image beautifully! The rythm and flow is great and it flows nicely! Good luck in the contest!
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LOL...love the humour in here sis and where you took the picture. Another cute poem from you just as entertaining as the last one I read..you maintained a great rhythm all the way through accompanied by lovely rhyme. A real pleasure to read, Excellent!...good luck in the contest, this has to be a winner!
Shaz xx
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lol... oh mum this was funny and cute i loved it i cud just see the babies sayin that if they cud...
best of luck in contest
xxx cheeky xxx
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I love this poem. you did a excellent job on the picture prompt. I like the first and last stanzas. thank you for entering. good luck in the contest.
kat
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hehe this is such a cute and beautiful take on the picture. i loved how your words just flowd of the page. well done gran and best of luck
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