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The Song's Talk-Story

A little tap,
The barest brush
And I'm flying
The wooden floor is there no more
Only the stars in my eyes
Springs in my legs
And music in my ears
A swaying, rhythmic cadence
Drenching me in something I can't touch,
Can't taste, can't smell, can't see
But I close my eyes and try anyway
It's an expression, you see,
A talk-story of what the song is saying
It's a different tale every time,
A book I want to read over and over again.

What does your story say?

Author notes

#8 - If you share my love for dancing, express that
...so I did. Thanks! (Option for the contest I entered this in)

A contest entry

Mr. Comment Box wants to hear your story...in comments! Tell him a beautiful melody-talk-story here...and leave a comment or two, while you're at it.

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Comments


  • Tarja
    January 4, 2008

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    I enjoyed the personality written into this piece. It is very obvious to me that dancing is part of your soul and I can tell this just from your words here. Thank you so much for your passionate entry and good luck.