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Words and We

Words grew
like monggo seeds.

Words can be uprooted
like weeds?

Words are made up
of different letters.

We have our own
distinct characteristics

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  • crimsondew
    January 15, 2008
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    Wonderful imagery at work here..like this a lot..i had written a similar poem on words...


  • raggyann
    January 12, 2008
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    this was deep
    words can leave scars
    good poem great message

  • Liquid memories
    January 9, 2008

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    very true and woerds can cut like a razor or sharp knife and the wound as bad. thank you for sharing this.


  • anaisnais
    January 8, 2008

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    Your muse runs deep. Much thought has been placed here. Words can cut and slay a man or praise and hold on high....Your poem could continue and hold more still. Words can encourage, bring laughter or pain; yours inspire the mind to greater things! Well done!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 4, 2008

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    Filled with thoughts

    words

    all different from each other

    yet

    can grow into beautiful pictures

    or be uprooted

    like weeds

    very good!

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