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Follow on #2

I fear the pain
It drives me insane
I'm expecting the worst
But I know there's a gain
From all this pain...
All of this pain
That drives me insane.

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I hope this is what you meant I went by your rhyme scheme and the 1st entries idea/poem

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  • Janice M Pickett
    January 4, 2008
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    Cool

    Yeh thats quite right and I think it's great. HUGS